The chart below shows the amount of money
per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows trends in consumption
of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the
information shown below.
Summarise
the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the
expenditure on three different types of fast food such as hamburgers, fish and chips and pizza in people in different level of income.
From the chart, it is clear
that in a high-income group, 40 pence is spent on hamburgers a week, which is
the largest among the expenditures on all the three types of fast food. This
expenditure is also the greatest one in the average income group, but the
amount of money spent is only about 33 pence a week, much less
than that in the high-income group. As for the low-income group, the largest
expenditure is on fish and chips, about 18 pence a week.
The line graph compares the
trends of the amount of three type of fast food consumed between 1970 and
1990. It is clear that the amount of hamburgers and fish and chips consumed
showed an increasing trend, while pizza consumed gradually decreased from 300g in 1970
to 700g in 1985, before it grew to about 240g
in 1990. The consumption of fish and chips overtook that of pizza and
hamburgers in 1982 and 1988 respectively.
This
report covers the requirements of the task. The main trends and features were
presented but should be developed better. The candidate has arranged ideas
coherently, though the data is reported in a repetitive way. The range of
vocabulary is adequate. There are a few errors in grammar and word choice, and
one instance of inaccurate data (mouse over the underlined words shows
corrections). Overall, this task response meets the expectations and seems good
enough to achieve Band 7.
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